Thursday, November 17, 2005

my luv with aby

told abt da dream inspired poetry na..
here it s...

i felt like i entered a new world..
fresh breath of air..
with loads of fragrance..
loads of love in heart..

i saw my dream as you..
beautifully packaged..
and sent to me..

nothing actually matters wat s around..
the most beautiful place..
or the awfully crowded streets..
what matters is tat i am with you..

all my love started with you
and will probably end with you..
i find the best part of me in you,,
and the wost part of you in me,...

i feel your presence even when you are not with me..
your smile fills each and every part of me..
i forget my unhappiness when i think of you..
you are my "epitome of happiness"

what did you ever find in me?
to love me so much?
when i could not find a single reason
not to love you...

now, i think..
how incomplete my life would have been without you...



how romantic na? had a great experience writing it... inspired from "jadoo hai nasha hain" from jism...
my most fav song.

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

hey william wordsworth thangachi nu nenapa ??????????? paragraph a split panni line line a ezhuditta adhu poem aayiduma ???????? anyway i'll give u a suggestion - try falling in love. kavithai nalla varum dear.... seri seri manasa thethara madiri inda oru comment - the so called poem was gud. - janani

saranya said...

hello yar... love.. not in my dictionary babe.. give tis suggestion 2 yrself rather.. hahah

Anonymous said...

hey sara,

In the poem under 'Guys', is the guy far away from u or is he blowing right into ur face!!! mite be i can't figure the continuity here...

saranya said...

don ever try 2 undersatnd! i regret 4 havin given my blog id 2 u!

Anonymous said...

saranya.....im quite astonished t find this poetess in u...never known b'fore.....any influential emotional upheaval???

saranya said...

dunno da! i ve jus started experiencing things... maybe a result of 2 much flirtin i d say.. nothing serious

Anonymous said...

hi,
i am from your senior batch.
just out of curiosity, Does 'aby' refer to anyone with a similar-rhyming name ????